In our media lesson we asked some students in our class to watch our film and give us some feeback to what we could improve and what was good about it.
The reactions to the film were good, most were shocked when they saw that she was concealing a gun.
The improvements we could make would be to make it flow more so its not just clip after clip, our media teacher Ms Humpbleby also suggested that we should take out one of our clips of the gun because once the audience sees the gun there are too many clips of her holding the gun to his head, we wanted it to flow smoothly.
The reactions to the film were good, most were shocked when they saw that she was concealing a gun.
The improvements we could make would be to make it flow more so its not just clip after clip, our media teacher Ms Humpbleby also suggested that we should take out one of our clips of the gun because once the audience sees the gun there are too many clips of her holding the gun to his head, we wanted it to flow smoothly.
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